Let the Editing begin

Well. I started to read my novel today.

Here are some things I noticed:

• I should have either fewer sex scenes, or more stuff happen between the sex scenes
• I should explain clowns more
• I need a plot, and a new villain
  
• My characters are too nice
• It needs a lot of work
• That said, it's not too bad

Going forward I plan to read the rest of the novel and then probably read it again, while taking notes.